two ghosts/fictional mess

[vida 𝜗𝜚 ࣪˖ ִ𐙚]

incredible

[Ash ✪]

thank you <33

[krista lynn]

so so goooood!!!!

[Ash ✪]

thanks krista!!!

[marga ꕤ]

Part two reads like lightning in a bottle. "I talk like a fictional mess" what a line. Pure poetry breathing on the page. 🤍

[Ash ✪]

Marga, TYSM!!! that really means a lot ^-^

[Rael]

Dual perspectives always manages to stun me.

[Ash ✪]

I am glad I could stun you! ty for reading

[cooper devine]

woahhh “you burn less than you kindle” is such a killer line

[Ash ✪]

tysm cooper! it means a lot:)

[bambi]

I really do love the simple way you write poetry, it has its own style and way of narrating a story fr

[Ash ✪]

Thank you, Bambi! It means a lot! :p

[red]

GOOD WORKKKK

[Ash ✪]

THANKS RED!!!